Story review and changes

After a long silence of not updating, I have decided once again to reorganize and refresh this story. Much of it will remain the same except the removal of one of the story arcs. Much of the material needs a good proof read and alot of work, so much of this will occur as I update things.

The story will still follow a Captain who makes a discovery of an alien artifact and subsequently escapes capture. While this occurs, the training and life of a soldier in this future world is followed and ultimately the stories cross as the crew are sent back out into space.

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